If I had to limit my comments to just one helpful critique to amateur photographers world-wide, it would be this; “Quit focusing on the ‘story’, and instead focus on the exclamation point!”
Too often, the compositions of amateur photographers include far far too much stuff, and in the process, that ONE THING that was the cause of their visual excitement to begin with, gets reduced to a whisper, having to now share the compositional stage with many other voices competing for the viewer’s attention.
When we make a concerted effort to compose ONLY that one thing, it’s as if we are placing an emphasis only on the exclamation point, sentence be damned.
And you know what? That’s a great habit to get into!!!
Both of these images (2nd image below) are all about a hand-picked bouquet of yellow flowers, yet only the vertical composition clearly conveys that bouquet in the loudest voice. Move closer and/or change lenses, but start getting into the habit of exclaiming your excitement by composing ONLY the exclamation point!
You Keep Shooting,
-BPSOP Founder – Bryan F Peterson
Bryan Teaches:
Understanding Exposure & Your DSLR
Understanding Color, Seeing Color & Composing Color
Understanding Close-Up Photography